Changes:
Page 2-
Cut all text and replace with…
Our panto tale concerns a
boy, a young lad, Jack by name.
An idle chap, if truth be
told, who yearns for wealth and fame!
These days he’d try for TV
glitz, one game show or another, You’d see him on X Factor, or even Big
Brother!
But in these times of olden day, you couldn’t
laze or shirk. You had to get off you behind and go and do some work!
What will the future hold
for Jack?
Will everything be well?
The answers will be revealed
in the story that we tell.
The villagers are gathering,
for the annual May Day fair,
lets go there now and meet
with them,
down at the village square!
Page 3-
Opening song- on a wonderful….
(cut opening song and just have on a wonderful day)
also put on a wonderful day under the village square scene
cut the word song for each song. It will just have the
title.
In call me maybe- only Jack and Princess Alice
Page 4 and 5-
Cut out the line: order of appearance
All font size where cast wrote something about themselves
needs to be same size
All headshots need to be same side and need to be taken from
original and made smaller via the corner.
Have a play with it a see what pic and text works where.
Look at phone I showed what else needs to be done.
Page 6-
The band-
Philip- change name as its only one L not 2
After dance captain put jack chambers as the theatre
technician
Then after lighting design
Stage manager- Alexandra Murgu
Automation- chris norman
On props add tracy allsop
Photography one- the guys last name needs a captail F:
O’Farrell
Page 7-
*Shelley- spelling mistake
with Dominic name there cant be a hyphen, put his name on
new sentence.
Need to add people last name…
Sarah Sanderson
Max Cairns
And
a special thanks…. Section:
Get
rid of “some money”
Cut- if you enjoyed the show… and website
Instead put
We offer training in Musical Theatre, Dance, Acting and
music. After 2 years with us you could be in a show just like this. For
information please visit us on….
(also needs to be centred in middle of page)
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